"Uhm… Mr. Dante, why are you still using your cloak?" Grea asked me innocently. I'm not in the mood for questions so I ignored her, hoping she would lost interest and shut up.
This is my first review, so I’m not sure how well I’ll do.The best aspects of the story are its plot and grammar. I find it very original, although it starts off a bit slow since there isn’t much action in the first few chapters. However, that doesn’t bother me too much because, in return, we get to see the introduction of characters and the development of the MC.As for world-building, it doesn’t introduce too much, at least at the beginning, but it gives us small glimpses to help us get oriented, which is a plus for me. I don’t like info dumps.I recommend reading the first 20 chapters before forming a conclusion about the novel.Thank you very much, author! Keep it up.
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