i can't even put a serious face while reading ahahaha more chapters po

you did a good work author, great writing quality, keep up the good work

Ava is so innocent. I'm still wondering why their bestfriend bond broken.What if Liam also had crush on Ava, but thinking that Ava treated him as a friend and he developed feelings, Ava would feel disgusted, So, he hid his feelings and got a girlfriend hiding from her?Anyways, the plot and character design are good showing Ava's incredible journey.Let's see how this journey goes. Keep it Up! Author.

- "What’s the premise of this story?" The book is set in a world plagued by constant wars and unrest. It follows a squad of three characters—Velvet, Kouneli, and Leo—as they strive to bring peace by taking down dangerous factions like the Ministry and the Authority. It’s a journey full of challenges, alliances, and battles for a better future.- "What kind of characters can I expect?" Velvet is fearless, energetic, and curious, though they tend to get easily distracted. Kouneli is cautious and shy, but he’s brave and determined when it truly matters, though he struggles with self-doubt. Leo is fiercely loyal, honorable, and always ready to defend his friends. Together, they form a team that’s full of heart, conflict, and growth.- "Will the squad just steamroll through everything?" Definitely not! While the squad will become stronger as the story progresses, every victory will be earned through effort, strategy, and overcoming tough challenges. Expect high-stakes, hard-fought battles, and real struggles along the way.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but it’ll focus on genuine, meaningful relationships rather than overwhelming the story with romantic drama. No harems here, don’t worry!- "How frequently is the story updated?" Right now, I’m uploading 4–5 chapters per week. Depending on how things go, I might tweak the schedule, but you can count on steady updates for now.- And, lastly… "Are you hyping up your book too much?" Well, what can I say? I think it’s awesome. It’s definitely one of my favorite things I’ve written so far (though I might be biased). Don’t take my word for it—give it a read and see for yourself! ;)

I just want to make a request. Pls pls pls. Don't follow any trope storyline. I am tired of searching for smn new and I hope u can grant me some peace. no hiding skills, acting dumb, getting kicked out of noble house, girls just randomly flocking and joining the harem, mc is just generic template type shit. pls give the mc and all the fl a unique character and good story. that's all. thank you.

I don't normally read smut novels or all but from the synopsis it shows a promising novel layout and reading it was not a mistake at all. it is a great novel with rich character design and a good world background if you like smut read this, if you don't but want a good novel with nice plots then read this too.great job author 💯👏 bravo

Possessing all 7 swords has been the great dream of Tsein since 200 AD years ago till now.Rahim is their only one believed can stop Tsein from  this, he is believed that he might be able to defeat anyone, even someone who has possessed all 7 swords but it doesn't mean that he can't be defeated. A rise of new villain power called a heart of dragon, a new and a villain character that I don't want to mention the name. Three ladies:The princess, Santra and the villain. They are all in love with Rahim. Who will Rahim love  most ??.... ('_' ) Crafting a Sci_fi and fantasy genre is hard of course but at least I tried and I won't regret it, something amazing about your author is just 18 years old. I might be the young writer in this platform.... (*_*)

The Author delivers an engrossing tale that successfully marries traditional fantasy tropes with innovative storytelling. Whether you are drawn to epic battles, intricate world-building, or the emotional evolution of a flawed hero, this novel promises a richly layered reading experience. While the journey is fraught with betrayal and dark mysteries, it ultimately celebrates the enduring power of hope and the possibility of redemption in even the most chaotic of worlds.If you’re a fan of immersive fantasy adventures that challenge both your mind and your heart, this novel is well worth your time.

This story is really keeping me at edge of my sir waiting for the next part.

Hi everyone! ( ´ ∀ )ノ～ 🤍I’ve been thinking about creating an Instagram profile where I can keep you updated on this novel and any future projects I’m working on. It would be a space to share exclusive content—like sneak peeks, character designs, behind-the-scenes info, and more!If this is something you’d be interested in, let me know. I’d love to connect with you there and share even more of this journey together!

As I always say, system themed stories have a way of making any small flaw go unnoticed. I wish there was more focus on worldbuilding. Nevertheless, the writer does a great job at anchoring the readers interest. This goes to the collection.

The sanctuary is bigger than i thought it would be🤯