Entangled in Eternity

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Really like both of authors other novels... KTP is nice wish you can release more of that please plz please.. but this take proititty i understand. BUT work hard and dont forget bout other one

If you can compare it to other novels, it is like the korean novel Running away from the hero that combines with a system.. It has a bit of a different feel, but has the same plot of a funny instructor villain.. You are an instructor who trains villains and some disciple become a villain or a hero who loves you or wants to take your life like a tsundere or yandere... hahaha.. give it a try..

The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold.  But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.

the Best one in this batch .............

An excellent continuation of the TAP story with an emphasis on the Exodus platform and the Guns and Gore game tantalizingly mentioned in the original storyline.

I like the story. It's really great. The way Kye's emotions are shown is well good and the way you show how your characters think is great too. They aren't just some people to decorate the scene but real people with emotions.Continue author-nim

Personal review from the author.It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader.First and foremost the writing quality. It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine.There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five.Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too.But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand.Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character.The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars.About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.