Elgra Greas - Compilation of History

It’s better than most novels but wouldn’t say it’s amazing.There’s something off with Ren’s personality. It’s like he’s bordering a control-freak edgelord while trying to be a calm, composed, and relatable MC. The dichotomy should be the major personal struggle of the novel but the appeal of it just falls flat.Also if you’re expecting classic Alchemy, then you’d find little of it here. World building could also use a bit more flair as it is lacking and grammar could be better but that’s just a minor issue for me.

A masterpiece in the making. Great storyline so far , a proper plot that  develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.

I shamelessly rate this with the highest marks, simply because for me, this is the best, the best that I can do for now.I made this story because I love wacky Ideas like aliens and cowboys or ninjas in space. Well, I tried going for a martial arts in the zombie apocalypse. It's really enjoyable making up these people and stories. If I could could do better in some parts I would appreciate all critiques, and if I did well then it is very great to hear.If you like it then I would appreciate you're support, if not, thanks for giving it a read, and if you didn't read it, thanks for reading this review. Have a good day!

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Silk looked at him with pity. "This transformation will kill you from the inside out, trust me I know," Silk said through gritted teeth going to his knees.

Hati smelled the scent getting farther away and sped up to his maximum. He didn't believe that he'd be shook off.

<p>'So, this is how we're going to deal with this, huh?'</p>

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