Douluo: Emerald Poison Emperor

The beginning was awesome chef’s kiss muah. Around ch. 25 - 30 i started to feel a little iffy if i wanted to continue reading, then at the next 5 chaps i just got bored? Tired of it? of course just my personal opinion didn’t give too much constructive criticism or any at all so up to the other peeps who read this stuff

The story is quite interesting, and i was quite amazed how long every chapter was. But upon continuous reading, the explanation just goes on and on, it's like 40% main story and 60% explanation on how things work, what that thing is, etc. This made me skip a couple of paragraphs,  but still get the gist of the story.So author-nim, please omit the long-winded explanation, and unnecessary inclusions.

Everything was perfect i dont have nothing to say its the best novel i have ever read recommend you to read it 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

Ok, you can take this as a bs review since im only chp 1, but im gonna say my piece. The story so far is terrible. This random girl that everybody likes and wants to be with has taken a bet in a game, and everybody cares because the bet is to make her leave the class. So, she gets help from the class by considering being the gf of the person who wins. Forgot to mention every classmate is thirsty, and author makes an uncomfortable analogy about betting wives with respect to random girl. Ok. If that isnt a red flag for you right from the start idk what to say. Oh yeah, translation is pretty bad too.

omg, this is so awesome and relatable. my grand-father is also a cultivator so i can totally relate to the main character, why else would I put a 5 star?

The writing quality is very poor, especially In the beginning, it gets better towards the end, but can still be hard to decipher what they are saying at times. The world building is pretty good and so are the characters. The only reason I kept reading till the end was because I found the concept interesting, especially the blessings, that was fun. The first thing that should be worked on is the writing quality, it is almost near impossible to understand what I am reading at some points and that needs to be worked  on immediately. It was hard to understand what was happening when the mc and his dad first met. I still dont know why he cant be his dads son anymore. That whole part made no sense, also with the mind place with the island and ****. Still don't understand that because it was not explained properly and the writing quality didn't help. Also, the characters emotions and personality change dramatically at times. It's just a real mess to be honest. Cool concept, bad execution.

After 10 minutes of listening to Mayu and Leiya preaching about Miyuki's perfection. Cram finally gave in.

"I don't have any." Namjoon said then started the engine.