Dominion System Rise of the under world king

It's Redlove here! 🥰.I'm giving myself a positive review. Shameless, I know right...🙇u200d♀️🙇u200d♀️ but I hope it's fine with you guys here. As a new writer, I would say I tried for my very first novel. Thanks to all who are engaging in this novel..🤭. And for those who are just reading and not adding to your library,please do. Leave a review so I can hear your thoughts on this book so I can improve on certain concepts through your feedback and vote as well....✅✅. It would help my book a lot...thanks again

Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately

One of my favorite stories to date . Awesome plotline, good progression, amazing characters. Love the MC , only complaint would be I wish there were more scenes between the MC and her love interest . Can't wait to read more !

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