Dominion System Rise of the under world king

Ok so I don’t really write reviews but I just read up to the latest chapter  and I can say that this novel has a unique feel to it. It has a good pace which is not to slow or not to fast (good job author) and the thing I like the most about it is that Ozul has a unique character with the way he likes sleeping under a tree at night and switching to the house in the morning. It’s also awesome that he has a actual reason to like darkness and Gives some solid answers and comparisons not like the other novels which is like oh I love darkness and it’s one with me blah blah blah...One thing I would probably change about it is I feel there should be more of a bonding between Ozul and Raven because they’ve lived together for 10 years and I think that they should have become closer rather than just lap pillows. I need MOREEEEEE. Also sorry if there are mistakes in my review cause I’m not good at English.

Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development.  As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.

Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️

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