no offense but how did this garbage become the most popular martial arts novel? the grammar is so bad, the story is even worser, the mc death is so cliche and badly written, the novel is way tooo fast paced, there are no details, and i would also like to say that this has already been done before thrice, way better in the forms of TSS, WOTD, and the other system novel which i forgot its name, this novel is basically plagiarizing from TSS, its obv because the author himself said that he liked TSS in like chapter 3, i know its good to like something but you just literally copied some stuff from it to your novel and thats not cool, especially since you can't literally write at all, your mc is not good and this novel is dropped, its really sad this thing got to be 1# on the whole martial arts section
This sign-in novel was good compared to others. First of, the novel started slow, unlike others they rush their story. Here, you can see in each chapter the protagonist's progress, either in his mind/will or in cultivation. And the time skip in the novel was just days, not years signing in. It also carefully revealed the settings and characters of the story as chapters pass by. All in all, it's a whole lot better than other sign-in novels.P.S. Anyone? Raws?
Stop fake reviewing guys. This novel is semi-decent though the quality is rough at parts but only because of the author's inexperience. Somehow there's no sense of politics at all since the author believes that everything follows a certain military guy's orders when everything is decided by senates and councils etc. Its very unrealistic when coming to that and how the public reaction would actually be in said scenario. For a first time novel its great but author do some research as you seem to be twisting the earth to fit the MC's situation. Characters are one-dimensional too.
I know, shamelessly reviewing my own book. This 140 minimum charter count is ridiculous but then again a honest review would be longer then that so all good.
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