Build A Technological Civilization

The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad

Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.

Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.

Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.

Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.

World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?

Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star

One of the best novel i have ever read.

Sou brasileiro e nao sei ler em inglês, então to usando tradutor para ler essa magnífica obra, como também nao sei escrever em inglês, darei minha resenha em PT-BR mesmo, vle autor, obra incrível, bem diferente das usuais q tem extremo foco no prota e esquece do entorno

I actually like this. It's got a good story, nice concept, and the MC is actually kinda aight. Definitely one of the best ones I've read, and it's not stuck behind a paywall once, so that's one more reason why I like this. Although, the chapter updates aren't consistent, I don't really think that's a big issue.

I hate the unstable updating.
I hope you could do something about it.

Sou brasileiro e nao sei ler em inglês, então to usando tradutor para ler essa magnífica obra, como também nao sei escrever em inglês, darei minha resenha em PT-BR mesmo, vle autor, obra incrível, bem diferente das usuais q tem extremo foco no prota e esquece do entorno

The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad

I actually like this. It's got a good story, nice concept, and the MC is actually kinda aight. Definitely one of the best ones I've read, and it's not stuck behind a paywall once, so that's one more reason why I like this. Although, the chapter updates aren't consistent, I don't really think that's a big issue.

this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense

A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.
A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah
you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now
like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something
all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid
I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all
it's not perfect English but it's readable

so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book

Amazing book. Read all chapters up to 444. This book encompasses many types of books in one. Some of which include magic, martial arts, beasts, and technology. The book also follows several plots like transmigrated to a territory and upgrading it over time, kingdom building from primitive to sci-fi, invasions of otherworldly creatures, and also inheritances of treasures or mighty figures. The book is great and I strongly recommend it.