Alexander Sebastian found himself in a world where everyone could awaken a Planet. The size of the Planet dictated its Origin Energy, which in turn determined the strength of its Civilization.
Some individuals crafted their Planets with Qi, giving rise to Martial Arts Civilizations where every inhabitant was a martial artist. Others used Magic to build Magical Civilizations, turning everyone into mages. Yet others employed Spiritual Energy to create Immortal Civilizations, filled with immortal cultivators.
Everyone was striving to construct extraordinary planets. Sebastian, however, leveraged his memories from his past life to forge a technological civilization!
Your Star Destroyer pierced through the opponent’s planet, leaving them no choice but to bow their head in defeat.
Your two-way foil reduced the opponent’s planet to a mere piece of paper, striking fear into their hearts.
This story revolves around using technology to break through all sorts of Supernatural Civilizations.
I apologize for any mistakes; my English is average. The quality will improve in later chapters.
The cover art is by Cole Thomas, titled "The Course of Empire: The Arcadian or Pastoral State" (1836).
just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah
you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now
like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something
all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid
I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all
it's not perfect English but it's readable
so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book