Muy buena novela los ultimos cap un poco cortos pero me gusta una de las pocas historias que sigo con frecuencia lastima que este en esta plataforma cuesta mucho importarlas al programa que me lee las novelas
so far as of chapter 2 this is a great story can't what to see more.............................................................................................................................
ok I have read somewhat to 20 chapter's but I think I have one thing to say. we all know it's a translation but please edit some names because it can be hard to remember or they are all over the place how similar they are. and world background so far is good.
At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation.
just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.
A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah
you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now
like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something
all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid
I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all
it's not perfect English but it's readable
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just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah
you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now
like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something
all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid
I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all
it's not perfect English but it's readable
so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book