Build A Technological Civilization

ok I have read somewhat to 20 chapter's but I think I have one thing to say. we all know it's a translation but please edit some names because it can be hard to remember or they are all over the place how similar they are. and world background so far is good.

At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation.
just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.

Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.

Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.

Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.

Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.

World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?

Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star

I have been following this story for a while and I love it. Please keep it up and don't drop.

I hate the unstable updating.
I hope you could do something about it.

overall it's good especially since this novel is free and doesn't require money to read

Very good book. It has a good story and i would really recommend to read it

There was definitely a period around chapter 70 or so where the quality of the writing dropped tremendously and it was really difficult to read. but after powering through  it was definitely worth it. It isn't the best story ever, but it was unique and very entertaining.

Fantastic work the Author . The world building is great and characters has consistent  I genuinely enjoy the story .Keep up the good work.

Muy buena novela los ultimos cap un poco cortos pero me gusta una de las pocas historias que sigo con frecuencia lastima que este en esta plataforma cuesta mucho importarlas al programa que me lee las novelas

Very good story but it will be better if you use chat gpt so the reading can be better it also because of this that i don’t give more star for me if the translation is just a little better and we have more chapter per week it will be perfect but i want to thank you for the amazing job and also for free and it one favorite story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Awesome ................................