Honestly, it's not the cookie cutter plot that's the problem... it's how it's so forced... he knows he needs to be low key.... but chooses not to be... doesn't leave the sect... and leaves such easy clues I don't get why he's not killed already.... he's reincarnated but doesn't properly take advantage of that to the point that the reincarnation is pointless... it's like the author just wanted this system and then forces the cookie cutter plot.... and how bad is it you ask???Author has him cleans his marrows with a pill while already having a cleansing system....
The Author should update more. This novel has a lot of potential to perform well. The mc's development will be worthwhile to read. Overall this is a very good concept for a novel and the Author should just update more.
A good story about world development despite the plot being over done in many novels on this site. Too bad the author took a break, but it's worthy reading.
I really love it, although the grammar is a bit off but the clarity of the story can really be seen. πππ For the author, I hope that you can finish the story since it's very interesting.
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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