It is a very interesting book, well written, with a fascinating story, well-developed characters and an extraordinarily created new world.And a very passionate author, eager for affirmation, who will leave you in ecstasy with each chapter.

Your story is beautiful, but you have to make some grammatical adjustments to it, you can learn from it and in the end you will become a good writer 👍

The entire thing makes sense but I still want to figure out why sometimes he's incredibly powerful the next he's an underdog

I’m really enjoying the novel, the way you’ve built the VR world is really interesting. The Grim mark on Airum added a cool touch to the story and made me even more curious about what’s going to happen. The idea of having a game filled with so many mysteries, along with character development, is coming together really well! And most importantly, it’s not just about Airum, it’s also about how he’ll evolve with his friends and within the game. I’m excited to see what’s going to happen in the upcoming chapters! 😸

Great bookgood jobWell doneThis book has great potential I hope you shine bright and reach the international streams too

The book so far it was good. With some missing parts that made me a bit confused, but the characters are well done and it has some funny moments. I hope that in future chapters the story to bring light in my confusion. I do recommend to read it if you are into these kind of novels.

"I'm thoroughly impressed! The quality exceeded my expectations, and the experience was seamless. Highly recommended!”

this story is so well written. Each character is complex and well developed. Even more importantly, they are funny. The MC is an excellent mix of sass and delightful innocence. The ML does a good job at towing the line between obsessive devotion, and respectful care. So far, there hasn't really been any of the toxic pitfalls that you usually see in this kind of trope.Overall: 10/10 a good read

Amazing start. Has introduced an intriguing world so far that is still steeped in a lot of mystery. And the character introductions are also top notch.

Sorry author-sama I'm dropping this novel. I read up til chp 123 I believe, titled Red Dress. The concept of the story was what got me into reading it, but when he turns 10 it starts getting fast paced. After discovering the oil in the parched lands it was nothing but invention after inventions popping up real fast, wasn't even stretched out but more skimmed over, not what I wanted to read in a worldbuilding novel. Now its to the point in the story we see  the female lead when he's 11 years old, and she's 10 (as I'm writing this, they have yet to meet). She's quite basically the same as him just not in the magical class but the warrior class. Which is ok for most stories but in this one it just feels forced, it doesn't seem natural (she's his arranged fiance by both parents). For me this was the last flag.Hope people still read this though these are just my preference and opions. The writing quality is good.Storytelling in the beginning is good; now not so much.Character description is good.World building is there....Overall the concept is good but, unfortunately for me it just hit and missed the mark.

interesting highly recommend I can't wait for what comes next that is why I added it to my library so as not to miss any updates

good way to spend your time. the ongoing event is doing great job to promote it