The story is not bad
MC is good
Characters in this novel are above average in general and there are a couple of good side characters..
It has WOTMW vibes but this is much worse than Warlock imo...
I decided to drop it at chapter 1100+ because it contains a lot of fights and ALL of them are boring, I never enjoyed the fights in this novel because they feel bland and have nothing interesting to them
I don't think it is a bad read but because it looks very similar to WOTMW something in my head keeps whispering "This is worse than Warlock..."
Ngl, but the grandfather final moments were epic af. It was the only thing making me stick to the story until the arc where they start the War with that other World or something
Yeah... I agree with you, he is evil but in my opinion the author didn't really gave much of a valid reason.. It's okay for him to be cold and indifferent towards humanity for what he had gone through, but it didn't made sense why he was even cold to his friends which helped him, actually he should have been more considerate towards personal relationships since there were his master and his mother who literally exchanged their lives for his.
Hello, author here.
First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.
I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.
For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.
Have a nice day.
I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do.
It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim.
And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.
I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.
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MC is good
Characters in this novel are above average in general and there are a couple of good side characters..
It has WOTMW vibes but this is much worse than Warlock imo...
I decided to drop it at chapter 1100+ because it contains a lot of fights and ALL of them are boring, I never enjoyed the fights in this novel because they feel bland and have nothing interesting to them
I don't think it is a bad read but because it looks very similar to WOTMW something in my head keeps whispering "This is worse than Warlock..."
First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.
I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.
For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.
Have a nice day.
But, there needs at least 10chaps/day for it to truly be perfect
I initially thought that this novel will enter top 20 when it reaches 50 chapters.
Story is amazing. Content quality in each chapter is great. Mc is great. Release rate is extraordinary. Still this did not enter top 100.
There is something wrong here.
I can't find this novel when browsing through eastern fantasy rating section in 4.8 rating region.
Generally, on webnovel, I search for original novels by two ways :
1. In New novel section (I found this novel here) for new novels.
2. For slightly old and old novels, I search in genre ratings section. This novel is not in this section.
If this continues, we might lose an excellent Cultivation novel(rare these days).
Author, please don't lose interest, because of this issue. There is something wrong with webnovel(at least in your novel's case).
It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim.
And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.
I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.