The writer has good potential but he does not do enough research about the country hes trying to write the story setting in. His book literally has many errors in culture like guns being rare in the United States or businesses doing cooperations because hes too lazy to Describe the actual business transactions. At 1st the book was good and I can pass up the shotty writing but when you go through about a 130 chapters of it and you still see really glaring and I'm carrying mistakes that just make the Book unreadable in a choppy mess.
Cons: Story Development has huge holes which can't be explained by plot armor. To give examples: MC is able to level super fast and has infinit resources but stops leveling without any reason - could be killed any time by some of the hidden forces. MC creates a clone and does not use it.uploads are only one chapter at a time... we have seen better. World background is shallow but Overall setting is good.pros: Charakter Design of the Heros and sidekicks are great. Currently the bad guys are not deeply developed. The just pop up with standard bad guy behaviour.writing quality is good without any fancy wording. Easy to digest for non native speakers.
Story is decent and it's a nice read if you're bored - However the translation is so fucking awfull, it's in badly need of an editor. On another note, more and more stories on Qidian is really lacking editors, many of the stories are pretty much so badly mawed by the translator that it's impossible to read - This one/others Qidian is dropped until and editor comes along.
I ran out of free passes at chapter 96 and now im sad. :( Really wanna binge read till the end... sighhh. So now im writing this review to rant about my problems. so ye. its a good read. now I dunno wht to read. :/
Despite the familiar trope, the author manages to maintain a fine balance with the MCs power up. Talented but not OP. The story so far sidesteps pointless face slapping and overwhelming drama to create a believable world and a story that could occur in a fantasy cultivation setting.A rarity in the genre... I will wait the 2 to 3 months this takes to get released. Fingers crossed.
great light novel love it good story as well as character good player but to not the best or him being op. only thing that's not good is its like 1 chapter a month
It's a novel for bored readers, not for veterans, it's a novel for readers who want explicit scenes of R#18 with a completely na#ive and weak MC who was just lucky enough to have the divinity of the god of se#x and he only becomes strong at the end.So, if you have free time and you want to have Lemon scenes, this novel is for you.
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