At Sixty-Five, My Husband’s First Love Fell Ill

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it's not bad but not good either. it's hard to tell how good this story is because it's Translate is bad. so far, this story is around 2-3star. I rated 2 stars because it's really badly translated, or I hope it just badly translates. its writing didn't seem too good, all things considered. but again, this could be due to many translations problems. hopefully, this story can be rewritten or edited as this would be a massive improvement. but doubt it as webnovel, and most of the writers aren't like royalroad writers. who will rewrite parts to improve their story. hopefully, in your next story or later in this one, we can see improvements to your writing or translations.

Read to ch 19. So far the world is explained pretty well. It merely states the location not any description tho. Story arc rn seems to be school. There has already been some action. The best part of the novel so far is the characters they seem realistic and have life to them. (At least the ml and his buddy’s, side do have some to a lesser extent) And last but not less the ml seems to be smart. Don’t think ml will be a evil one base on what I know. This appears to be one of the better ones out of this batch. If Any1 know mtl or raw of this piz reply in the comments :)

It ok,I don't know what else to say because I'm done with this review but I don't want to put random letters and stuff as my review so I'm doing this and trying to get to 140 words or whatever.

Well its almost like what he thinks happens

Alexander Lionheart is an NPC that was originally created as both the Strongest World Enemy and World Guardian. He is both a God and a Devil. The Devil God. Created from both demonic and divine power and the greatest masterpiece that the Game Master created before the End of Yggdrasil, he was supposed to be introduced in the game in the next update, unfortunately, because of the sudden change on the developers the game marked it end but three days before the game ended he was gifted to the Guild, Ainz Ooal Gown as a farewell gift for some reason.

I opened the envelope. It had our family photo, with her and our two little ones. We all were smiling. There was a pink greeting card with a red heart printed on it. Inside the card, it read, "Miss you my dear Teddy Bear."

Love don't need to be begged