Ash and Honey

So I sat down and read this gem, starting around 11 PM, author hooked and trapped me into the best rabbit hole I could ask for. I feel like I blinked and it was 9 AM. I took a vacation day just to read this with zero regrets. Thank you author I hope to see you write more of this.

writing quality 4: to many misplaced comedystory development 4: averagecharacter design 5: pretty well thought and interesting charactersupdating stability 4: averageworld Background 5: give enough information to be interesting but not enough to predict what's gonna happen

"Ouch!! What was that for you little devil...and I pinched myself already... and you should pinch yourself not me!!!"

As soon as the second set of doors opened, Gashvorn was struck by a wave of pressure. This compartment was flooded with gases, and it was way too hot for a normal merchant stall. What was going on?

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"I have to taste whatever is edible. Our rations won't last long. And I'm the only one with poison resistance..."

Rivka: "Because something is nagging me about Maria's death and you are one of the two makeup artists in our company that I absolutely trust. Your husband being the other. But he is working with Zi Xin on another fasion show. You were my only choice. I am sorry Simon."

"Silly," The Goddess commented, "this story is rated for genera—I mean, I can't do that."

Aizawa: no time to waste on that kind of stuffs...U.A. is known for its FREESTYLE education system..... softball throwing, standing long jump etc. You did all of these in your middle school,yes? YOUR STANDARD NO-QUIRKS-ALLOWED GYM TEST. ..... Bakugo how far could you throw in middle school?

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

"mmm?, what's up, Ken?" Mocha turned in my direction while playing with a giant ball.

what a great start, looking forward to see how the story unfold. keep it up!