Ascension Protocol: The Rouge System

Truthfully everything lacking in this story, all compartments is atrociously subpar...i was hoping for something good because of its ranking but its just that misleading. if there was even half star, I would have opted for it

Writing quality sub-parStill not updated after 4 month Story development is mostly smooth.I have to say character design 6/10Not much of the world background is written.But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.

well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel  like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written

"Emilia, this is Jackson. He's a friend."

Gud

And with that, Rias's team fought against some weakling team and her team had a winning streak that made their confidence soar to the maximum thinking that they would be winning this rating game soon enough.

The horse had a bitless bridle and that was it, no saddle or anything, Mika never liked saddles, and Chief had bucked her off every time she had tried to use one. They walked out to the main road the only light coming from the moon and lanterns that hung on the buildings.

Royaal slowly walking dribbling the ball between his leg seemingly unconcerned with Apein in front of him closely guarding his right side. Suddenly Royaal dribbles the ball behinds his back left to him sprinting. Inspecting this Apein already sprinting to the other side of him. Only for Royaal to stop completely in his sprint crossing the gay dude Apein