I feel like would have enjoyed it more if it was written like a normal Novel and not something from the 80's, why exactly are you trying to complicate simple sentences with huge grammars, it's so off putting and annoying, couldn't focus at all.
Probably one of the worst novels i've read, thousands of years old mc but falls in love with a teenage girl, the mc can't even control his emotional behavior despite being so old, furthermore please correct your grammar,It's he for male and she for female.
I read this Web novel till 8 chaps and here are my thoughtspros1- The mc is ruthless, intelligent and overpowered2- Not much cultivation BS, short and straight to the point explanation.3- Good character introduction.cons1- Irregular updates2- A few typos I hope the author will release chapters regularly.
I have mixed fellings about this i liked the pacing of this but the mc is considered a potential high adventure but he going underprepared, at least in info, is bothering me so much and how come there are so little people with lvl it is not that hard to kill low lvl monster if you are prepared
The start is pretty good, let's hope it continue in its the same direction and so far I'm pretty hooked. i await more chapters, hope it stays interesting. so far its a +1 for me
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