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AiliseuTKA
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- July 1,2024
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Wow, I love your story idea, can you continue please.Your plot is very amazing, and you did well in the characters description.I can't wait to read more about it. I love everybit of it.
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This novel's world building, character development seems to be going very well considering only three chapters have been released so far. I love stories where the main character finds his way through despite his big flaws
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Yo, everyone, Akev here✋.Giving myself a 5-star review because the site allows it👍😉.So, this was the first book that I wrote in English, I think language gets better over time but I can't promise there won't be similar cringy dialogue you see in the first chapter, regardless, I think it's an interesting read, and that you should try giving it a shot🤗.I am posting this at the same time as I am writing Everlasting War: The Heir of Darkness which I do think will turn out as a considerably better book but this one has its charms.What is this book about? It is the story of Nero, a guy devoid of emotions. He is a monster hunter with a mysterious boss who talks to him through magical marbles. I have to say it was incredibly hard to make him interesting in any way without breaking the "no emotion" thing the way the writers usually do with such characters😂, but I think I succeeded. The problem is that rather than being a person born in such a way or being a typical sociopath he has his emotions taken from him so he literally can't feel them, it's not just the lack of empathy you would usually see or use to explain why the initial statement is still true. What you can expect from him is to have a whole lot of disguises and acts, and, of course, to be completely ruthless as he completes one job after the other while slowly working towards his overarching goal.If you like horror or dark fantasy, I think you will enjoy his story.Buay👋
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It's nice to get a little timeout from the world of fiction. I agree with the first poster. Thank you
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A MC with the powers of a transforming Druid is a pretty novel idea. Story is a nice chill read, but no more than that. A lot of times the reader is not given need information. An example is stars, which boosts the damage of skills used depending on chance. Author just randomly mentions it in a skill description, and doesn't even explain what they are or how you get them. It is inferred you get them from killing NPCs? But that's the problem, I'm not even 100% sure if that's how you get them. Could be combo score for all I know. A lot of plot holes for the sake of convivence too. The MC literally hits a one in one billion chance to upgrade an item to +30. No build up, it just happens. The main female lead's story with the MC just happens waaaaaay too quick as well. No build up to the reveal.
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this is actually pretty good. I've already gotten attached to all the characters and adding Finn for comic relief was a good idea!
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Magggguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuusssssssssssssss
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of course am the author so I have to comment on it 😁😁 feel free to ask me any question here and make sure you join the WhatsApp group chat and get an update.
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interesting story development and rebirth type novel l Want to read more but have not enough coins
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I BOW BEFORE YOU,KING RHETT, THE FATHER OF DRAGONS. It is an ammazing read, I literally got hookEd from the first chapter. Keep climbing and keep grinding.
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Nice story so far, like the concepts. Lets see how it goes.
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ok 👌🏻 I am reading this till the end of the chaps
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