Ancient Tears BloodLine

You have strong and great concept to work with, it felt pretty original, but the grammar makes me lose some of the immersion sometimes, but looking past that, I was able to enjoy the mechanics of the world you have built, keep it up!

Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.

Quite a good read so far. The story is well paced and there's a sense of adventure when you read. The world background is also intriguing and the future chapters will be something to look forward to.

Interesting... Seems like some interstellar Sci-fi novel with a touch of Xianxia. The quality of writing is improving as the story progresses further. The story has potential and can retain the readers. the main character so far is likable and I hope it stays like that. A good story so far... I can definitely see the author has cooked up something interesting. A great read!!

THIS GIVES ME A S.A.O vibe! well planned plot so far, read 10 chapters and I'm elated because to a person who loves the stimulation of graphic and visual imagery, its pretty good to kill time and kinda help yourself dissolve into it, the only thing is i wish your character had some flawsss because that would create more realisticity you get me?  short chapters, easy read, not a too complex world build (towards the beginning as far as I've read), the cover disappoints tho because its ambiguous to the content of the book pretty mmuchhhh.... the author has unused potential, could write better definitely has the ability just wondering why its very brief in a few chappies, nevertheless, looking forward to read AHEAD CHAPTER 10 TO UNLOCK MORE!

This is such a nice fantasy type. I reaişy enjoyed while reading. And I highly recommend everybody. Thank you for sharing this one, author...✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌

A great read! Truly! If I were point out the specialty of this novel, I would, certainly, say that the world building is the strongest point of this novel. Really liked it and looking forward to future chapters.

And dear author, the cover's way too bland. Please change it. Yuu, signing out!

Good job author. Keep it up.
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