Have read to chapter 154. Story so far has been great and exciting. Maybe reduce the amount of time and perspective shifts per chapter. Been noticing it too much from chapter 100 and beyond. Characters. The MC is too naive, but that is acceptable. The supporting casts have their own quirks that are fun. However, the female lead is UNBARABLE. She was fine in the beginning, but then EVERTHING ABOUT HER CAN BE DESCRIBED AS A FEMALE CAT IN HEAT. This STUPID high school romance is horrible this story. Every mention of her is just "Oh, I...I love him... but.... I don't know what to say...GRRRR STAY AWAY FROM MY MAN (they aren't dating)." She legit says, "You promised me your decisions would be at my mercy, Elio. (MC) Have you already forgotten?" The MC probably made this STUPID promise when he was 8, and WHO WOULD TAKE THIS PROMISE SERIOUSLY? SHE DOES, AND SHE GETS MADE WHEN THE MC DOESN'T WANT TO BE HER SLAVE BASICALLY. MC is dealing with the survival of EVERYONE, while she just wants a train ran. Overall, great story. Throw that TRASH female lead off the wall.
Heinrich fled as he saw a dreadful sight, a flying chimeraan with massive wings of a bat and the head of the wolf hounded him. It didn't notice his aura rather with its acute sense of smell. It seemed that it was trying to lure him further into the core.
After explaining this to others, order that in the future the meat obtained by the hunt would be stored in one of the two rooms of the structure where the ice was, and that in the other room where the snow is stored the crops collected except wheat, lentils and potatoes which will be stored in silos. These silos began to be built in the same way as this structure, but this time we did not use refractory materials.
Chapman J. Root, president ofthe Root Glass CompanyofTerre Haute, Indiana, turned the project over to members of his supervisory staff, including company auditor T. Clyde Edwards, plant superintendent Alexander Samuelsson, andEarl R. Dean, bottle designer and supervisor of the bottle molding room. Root and his subordinates decided to base the bottle's design on one of the soda's two ingredients, thecoca leafor thekola nut, but were unaware of what either ingredient looked like. Dean and Edwards went to theEmeline Fairbanks Memorial Libraryand were unable to find any information about coca or kola. Instead, Dean was inspired by a picture of the gourd-shapedcocoa podin theEncyclopædia Britannica. Dean made a rough sketch of the pod and returned to the plant to show Root. He explained to Root how he could transform the shape of the pod into a bottle. Root gave Dean his approval.[86]
Hearing the guard words at first didn't catch Mana attention but when he focused on it his face suddenly changed and a crazy look crept into his face as his calm and warm face entirely changed into a maniac look.
So far, your story seems really good. I truly appreciate your hard work. It was meant to be a slice-of-life and romance show, and here I was, hoping for a fight scene—silly me. But then you gave me some hope by showing a glimpse of werewolf and human strength. Now I want to know the mystery behind those four (...spoiler...) things that everyone is after. So, don’t give up! How will sarah defeat them ?
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