Ways to Kill (Love) You

quite the hidden gem! decent start and well written!

MC terlalu idiot, tidak sesusai caracter. Cerita bukan Tag Villain tetapi lebih ke Tag Anti-Pahlawan. Ngga ada kesadaran diri, padahal udah tau keadaan masa depan tetapi tidak dimanfaatkan. Pengalaman MC prolog berhasil membunuh raja binatang abadi harusnya ada pengalaman selama itu tetapi di cerita MC terlalu idioit seakan tidak ada pengalaman sama sekali

It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.

I Think the author even though he said that it was free but what the hell you keep the rest on your patron page.the character sound immature like tell me do you think we are reading for joke we are reading to uplift boredom not to bore us to death

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After what seemed like a long good moment within death's embrace, he suddenly woke up to find a creature; a yellow octopus to be exact.

he took a deep breath and focused for nearly 20 minutes he couldn't feel nothing so you took another deep breath in and they excelled to calm his mind and frustration he did so for another 5 minutes once his mind was clear he once again focused on the energy.