Never play baseball before, but this is a great story for you who does love this sport. The author knew their stuff and chose the correct diction to describe the process of the baseball game. I love how the author wrote the process of the characters training instead of suddenly going genius over it out of nowhere. Although yes, the character is granted some cheat by having these amazing inborn skills, but the author still makes him lack of basic foundation in baseball since he never plays before. So, this is a very logical plot which Iβm fond of.For writing wise, I do think thereβs some room for improvement but overall itβs adequate. It just needs some little editing. I do recommend breaking down your paragraph to make it easier on the eyes, because some parts, it does seem long.Good luck and keep writing author! ππ»
the novel is great, that the synopsis does not deceive you 10/10πβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈππβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπͺβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈπβοΈβοΈπππβοΈβοΈππβοΈπβοΈβοΈπͺπβοΈπβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈπππβοΈ
good novel, it reads very well, the story is consistent and interesting waiting for the next parts.Bardzo dobrze siΔ czyta. ,......,.........,......,..,.................................,......
The MC either you like him or hate him. He's your stereotypical loser, whose younger sister is a genius. As luck would have it, he found a wooden plank and boom, he can change his fate. It's not my cup of tea, but if it's yours go right ahead.
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I'll start by saying that the writing quality is very good. But it's 99.9% conversation filler. One person can say something, and the response wouldn't come till after 8 paragraphs of partially or unrelated info. By the time you get to the response, you forget what you were waiting to hear. Also feels like the author doesn't like their Mc when you can go 5+ chapters or more without a word from them due to a convo between two random citizens talking about a new building.
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