The Song of a Lost Life

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Alright, I usually don't write reviews, but I feel like this piece of c*** novel actually deserves one. I read until chapter 515, so I'm definitely qualified to give this review. My advice, don't read this novel. The author is racist beyond belief and uses skin tone to judge whether a person should be killed or not. And there is so much filler!!! The author uses at least 4 to 5 chapters, which we can just skip as it's not even relevant to the MC or the main plot, to just describe the various worlds and life stories of the people that inhabit them. And worst of all, once the the story reaches a certain point, the author decides to scrap the MCs cultivation and makes him start over for the second time. Almost everything he owned up until now has all been destroyed. In other words, completely wasting 500 chapters worth of our time and SS. I actually felt so cheated when I read up to this point. I read through all that arrogance, racism, filler and double crossing moments to just end up right back at square one. I assure you, I am not amused. All that time spent reading this novel was completely wasted!!!! This is a warning to all the readers, do not be fooled by how well the first few hundred chapters seem as the story's going to take a 180 degree turn.

It starts off with a bang and has continued to be that way . Its intriguing off the bat and feels unique. MC behavior can be explained, hell… If I was a young master I would be partying with girls too! The novel is good it’s a must read for beginners. I must say, not all people have the same opinions so don’t be too trusting on reviews and try it yourself.

Shameless author review. This is all going to happen in first person, and a completely new take on this type of novel.                                 

literally trash....pure copy of MVS + 50% of previous chapters were being repeated + trash n timid mc

I agree with what the other reviewers wrote. It definitely isn't the best novel out there. And understand why there maybe exist people that wouldn't like it. But for me, it is the only novel in a long time that I feel I have actually enjoyed reading. I Have read up to chapter 345 as of this review. And except for a couple of chapters between chapter 168 and 174(don't know exactly the reason just had to take a lite break from the story before returning to it), I would say that every chapter has brought me joy when reading.In the beginning, the misunderstanding felt a little(very little) forced. But now a couple of dozen chapters in, the misunderstanding feels to happen naturally to me. And that is a massive improvement. It would be boring to read a story where the author had to constantly take away the Protagonist's brain cells, to create a misunderstanding.Worldbuilding may not seem so great in the beginning, but as the story has moved along more and more details of an amazingly large world are revealed.Writing Quality I would say is good, there might be a few grammatical errors now and then, but I can easily overlook them.Story development is good, the plot moves along nicely, and at a steady pace. Some chapters now and then might be just fillers without plot, and just containing something ridiculous. But the author makes up for that with  3 chapters every day, many of them filled with plot development.Character design is where this web novel shines I believe.  As the author himself said, this Is a book about a character going through constant misunderstandings. And to make those misunderstandings happen without totally cutting away half of the Main and other characters' brain cells. Is amazing to me.The only problem that I stumbled upon when reading the chapters was the author's unique writing style, but when I got used to it, it was that writing style that made me enjoy this book so much.If you are hesitating whether to read this web novel or not, at least read the prologue and you will get an idea about the story, characters, and the author's writing style.

An Interesting premise. I'd like to see where this goes. What will happen if only you had access to Evolution? Let's see how it goes. Looking foward.

I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways:Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it.Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans  but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.