Oh come on, they keep giving Debbie the upper hand. They could have knocked her out by now, handcuffed her and started cutting off limbs until she tells them what they need to know. They need to quit listening to her threats and do something to her to make her talk. Her verbal taunting is disgusting
Poor Ricky, the poor boy has lost his rotten mom, dad, and now the girl he loved. He's just loosing everyone he loves left and right. Lulu deserved way better than dumb Zack and his garbage. I hope she's not dead and ends up with Ricky.
I love this story, unlike the other as "powerful papa...", "mr Odell's sinner wife...", "let me go mr. hill." this story seems not nagging on, but also the main male and female not stupid, they didn't fall on the devil, bi*ch schems....the other stories i read i all gave up as the male lead s stupi
VERY GREAT NOVEL! The main character isn't an a$$hole like most Chinese MCs, and he is very protective of his family, and is very likable. Out of all of the trial reads, this is definately one of the top ones.
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Its One of the Best and lot intresting then your Average Store Owner novels. Give it a try and you will love it..Just A Single Flaw-Author please Update fast...I can't wait🥺🥺🥺
I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way.I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.
Original but boring. Things I liked: The MC is basically an in-game scholar which is a cool new take that I wish had more play. Their family owns the game in addition to a bunch of other cool sci-fi related products/labs which is both an interesting character background and could wow the reader with ideas about the future. (Unfortunately, so far it is way underused) The world is a mix of different cultures from around the world and throughout history which hopefully means breaking away from East Asia/Europe (which is the generic setting for many of these). The fights are interesting and well done. The downsides: All of this sounds amazing but the delivery just felt flat to me. The only two cool sci-fi things actually mentioned are the video game and something to generate energy. The world feels modern rather than futuristic because of this. The family isn't interesting. Nothing wrong with that IRL but in a story it means that the chapters with the father drag due to a lack of interest. The sister is so in and out that she isn't much of a character. Again it makes sense why this would be IRL but in a story we need characters that grow and are interesting. There are glimmers of this with the MC's schoolmates and the former rankers in game but they aren't given enough time/enough of a spotlight to develop into anything. The game story is really slow. I don't really care about him doing a quest that everyone else has to do, just slightly quicker. The ghost sub plot is great but is buried under ... an escort quest that he takes for ??? reasons? The quest to gain Gaia's interest was cool too but the rewards were uninteresting. Ultimately his rewards are bland (50 chapters in and there is nothing that stands out), his actions are uninspired (there are no cool finding hidden treasures or bosses, just knowing how to get a base class), and when he does get interesting quests he either ignores them (he ignores the ghost until he can't anymore) or declines them (The oracle's epic quest). When the author mentioned the world was a mix of ours, I was hoping for a hybrid and therefore new culture. Not just a copy paste of cultures in different places, and those places are just European ones we have all seen before. Verdict: Worth a read to see if it is for you. The author may well be on to something eventually but I'm not willing to slog through more chapters to get to 'the good stuff'.
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