The Knight's Journey

I just read this work and it looks new. But I'm quite interested in the portrayal of the character, I hope the story is really good in the future. I'm waiting for the next update

classic story of a evil MC turning 'good'

there is an update,Is this novel back?                                                                                                   .

Well uhmmm............Some loner became a normieThere's cuteness overload involvedI mean it's a fun storyDon't wanna reveal spoilers *heheIt's one of those rare gemsAs it as other rare gems have a different sense of personality compared to othersi.e. writing style, plot, not the usualHahahaIt certainly isn't one of the usual tropessort ofAnyways....Just have a good read;3

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The premise itself is good, and the characters in MC's new world are interesting, especial So Won. If it's going to become *cough cough* BL *cough cough cough* I'd eagerly be following along. It's fine if it's not, though, I could just silently ship the characters from the safety of my couch ^0^I read past chapter 3, and though there were still some tricky parts, the writing becomes much better from there. I strongly recommend for any author to use Grammarly before publishing (and no, I'm not getting paid to endorse it this damn much). I have it installed in Chrome, it's my last line of defense before releasing a chapter. Here, there were still minor errors in the first two chapters that I didn't address because I'm pretty sure the free version of Grammarly would catch them just fine. That said, author, please take this as a gesture of goodwill because I saw in the forums how worried you were--Chapter 1:lion and his songs that--> and WITH his songs thatthe 75,000 seats in the stadium were full--> were FILLED (to capacity).Kim Chun Ha appeared on stage--> make it "onstage" -- no spacea 19-year-old boy with black hair and green eyes of 179cm entered -- like this, it sounds like it's his eyes that's 179cm, so...--> a 19-year-old boy OF 179cm, with black...they needed to take a sleep--> EITHER  needed to sleep OR needed to take a napJae Hyun decided to tell HER--> tell HIM In fact, I have already informed...--> you forgot to add the opening quotation mark "In fact...Do you even know dance? And just saying but when you agreed to give me your voice--> Do you even know how to dance (not sure if this is what you meant, but "know dance" doesn't sound right)--> make the next statement stronger by simply starting with "When you agreed to give..."--> delete "and just saying"He ignored what he had just told him before look at him and talk.--> (Jae Hyun) ignored Chun Ha's words (I'd suggest naming at least one of the characters in a sentence if they have the same gender; it's to avoid confusion about who's doing what)--> and simply looked at him before speaking.Kim Chun Ha's anger lashed his mind and blew up.--> I don't understand what you mean by "lashed his mind." Maybe it's best if you just say (his) anger blew up.I make you regret being born--> I'LL make you...a shot was heard--> a shot sounded OR rang out (to avoid the passive "was heard")Once he would be cured--> Once HE'S curedJae Hyun had a pinch in his heart--> Jae Hyun's heart constrictedChapter 2:He tried to sit down,--> sit UPhis body gave up to him--> up ON himhis agency—if you say so—saved--> did you mean "if you could call them that"?Fake to sleep? Hid?--> Fake sleep--> HideThink to something--> Think OF somethingand the panic gradually spread to him--> and his panic gradually spread (could use a different word here imo).He was going to tell them their home truths!--> "home truths" seems to be an idiomatic expression in French? Not sure, but it doesn't translate well, I would suggest a more common phrase like "tell them what's what"Sorry I didn't force you.--> Sorry, I shouldn't have forced you/pushed you too hard"Am I still dreaming?

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