The Crushed Mate Who Struck Back

"It look nice" he compliments me and kiss my forehead.

"Apa aja deh, yang penting dingin," ucap Rina pada pacarnya ini, lalu mengeluarkan buku pelajarannya.

Mr. Xero nodded. He got up to leave. "I see."

"There will be a fourth line where Emily will be in the middle with the Rangers keeping her safe while attacking from a distance."

Never!                    Never!         

Welcome friends!  This is my first experience in the world of writing novels, and you may find some mistakes or stumbles in some events. But I'm sure of one thing: I'll keep writing, writing, writing, improving my style step by step....by step.  This novel is not just words I write, but rather a reflection of my passion and desire to share my small worlds with you. I believe that every writer has a beginning, and my beginning is here.  I hope you enjoy this trip, and that it will be the beginning of long adventures that will bring us together.

Really an ok novel to pass the time. Though I don't like the MC at all. MC has no idea what his power is, also MC will forget the simplest of things. The MC try's to hide the fact he can see ghosts why? There isn't many chapters an the update rate is horrible. The only good thing about the MC is he has no family an lives alone.

10/10 author touched grass so he undertands how the real world and relationships works. I also love how he depicts how power changes people unlike other mcs who can never do wrong.

The story starts with an interesting idea, combining growth, power, and a unique world. The pacing is normal, making it easy to follow, and the challenges faced by the protagonist are meaningful.The writing is clear, though minor grammar issues might distract some readers. Overall, it's a promising start with good potential for improvement and development.