System in earth

author im rooting for nate and sera's story !!!

This story is not for those who enjoy a fast paced, guilty pleasure harem novel, and skip from novel to novel to find anything to gawk at for having a ‘badass, cold and ruthless’ MC, who is just a kid trying to look cool in reality.Translation Quality: 3/5There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, it is fine now, but it is still prevalent in the earlier chapters.Stability of Updates: 5/52 chapters a day since day 1, with not a single minute of delay throughout.Story Development: 5/5Those who enjoy fast-paced novels won’t be a big fan of this. This novel is the most well thought out novel on qidian by a long shot. The author isn’t scared to take his time, and it is AMAZING!!! The MC can’t cultivate at the start, only at chapter 1?? can he do so, but as a fan of cultivation stories, this story has BY FAR THE BEST START OF A NOVEL and IT’S QUALITY DOES THE OPPOSITE OF DECLINING.Character Design: 5/5BEST CHARACTERS ON QIDIAN, you could pick any random character from this story, and make a novel on them that would be a big hit. They all feel so realistic and fleshed out, that you can’t help but wonder in awe in how the author wrote them so well. The MC is amazing, and DESPITE HAVING SUCH DETAILED AND REALISTIC CHARACTERS, YOU STILL FEEL HE IS THE MOST INTERESTING.World Background: 5/5Phenomenal. The world has a clear and rich history better than any other. The history feels like a real history that could happen in our world, except a few people have some small powers. Not much to say, just brilliant.

A very interesting take to the school genre with a solid backstory and great writing that makes me keep reading. The character is realistic and the side character also have their own personality. Kudos to author for a job well done :)

I really like the premise, I want to read it, it interests me a lot, but ...grammar is infumable, it is bad, it gives cancer, it cannot be read without consciously killing neurons, it is like mtl, but a little better, although it is not worth mentioning it is improvement, sincerely I would like to believe that it is a novel copied and pasted from the author and then start to edit it, but I can only qualify it with one, since I am unable to get past the middle of the first chapter, with how rubbish the grammar is.

NEED MORE! PLS DO NOT DROP THIS AUTHOR..

"What already gone is he a ninja or what."

"'Our'? You mean that the macaroon I just ate was your family's? It was really good! Wait, how did you even know I just ate one?" The man seemed surprised.

As I was admiring my Katana,the Ar machine that my parents bought were set up in one of the empty rooms,meaning I could jump right in and start playing some games already.