I like medieval type stories so I might be biased when I say I like it but I really do. I really like the MC's name (Ethan Cross) as well, little details like this can really be intriguing. But something to improve on is the spacing in the paragraphs, some felt a bit long which can make things feel a bit draggy so I recommend just starting on new lines if it feels too much
This is the definition of Peak, love the characters (apart from Aziroth), love the world building and character development (apart from everything concerned with aziroth), Love the writing (apart from every word starting with A and ending with H) :]
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