it's pretty good i am too lazy to write any thing more bye ..............................................................................................

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

Eh it is good but it isn't awesome also update plz.                                                                                         

I took a chance because someone said waifu, author needs to give her more waifu scenes haha. But Julia best girl! Also author basically describe Griggs as my uncle lmao

Keep the focus on Hossam’s internal and external struggles, and make sure the fantasy world feels both magical and dangerous. Balance action with character development, and ensure that Hossam’s growth as a person is just as important as the adventure itself. This combination of magic, personal growth, and discovery will make your story not just exciting, but emotionally resonant for readers.

JUST wow, what an intriguing book! I was captivated from the moment I laid eyes on it. The writing is phenomenal, and the character dynamics are absolutely brilliant!

Thank you author ❤️ today very stressful day for me. But when I read today chapter I forgot my stress and laugh for sometime. I like the cat and mouse fight between ml and fl.

the story was going good for me until the 70s. had a great pace for me maybe even a little to fast, then we get stuck in a 10+ chapter long "spar". it killed to mood of the story for me. the author definitely slammed on the brakes a little to hard here.

A must read! This is a good book and I must commend the author on the brilliance in portraying the characters so well.. it’s a fantastic book which I can recommend to anyone it will keep you glued to your chair to know what happens next

keep going!!!!............................

I'm up to chapter 28 and so far loving this. The FL is super sweet and the 3 ML's are all very detailed and interesting characters. I thought I liked the Commander but the Prince is winning me over - love the burn. Can't wait for more of the two of them. Keep going dear author! You'll get my one vote a day :)

Hi author here I hope you guys love my book