Pokemon - Genetic Evolution

copy of infinite mana in the apocalypse novel I think this should be right right right......................... ......................... ......................... .........................

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I don't know what to say ....how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player the one star missing from world background you could have done better 2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like (any name)gendernpc or playerhealth / mana etc.there is no need for skills ....just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to doto make easier to understand the plot story its OK etc summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction like confused what's happening in novel I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing)other than that it very excellent as you cans see from other reviews

One of the Best novels i've ever read in this site, why?  You will know when you start reading it. ; ) i liked pretty much how the story developed so far.

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Little Treasure was terrified, he started screaming on top of his lungs and ran around to break more things. I have to run after him to make sure he does not hurt himself (>_<)

(Sky) "Where are you?"

his brother with a shocked tone