Out of Reach

This novel is absolutely godlike I find myself extremely exited every time I see that this novel has been updated. It is one of the best novels I have read in my career thus far. Thank you author for writing this amazing novel.

I like everything. I don't care about the grammar because I read worse (Chinese fanfic and translated through Google translate) and so all well interesting idea and yes I also do not know English well. But the piece itself is good

This is garbage. I have tried twice now to read this because the concept sounds interesting. It is written about a man who was scammed and now goes about being a scammer. His justification is that all the men he cheats are rude, ignorant and racist. Yes, every man in the book is racist against the Chinese. While the women a virginal saints that need the MC to save them. If this was a magic setting instead of a real place it would still be crap. Because all the interactions are the same and the characters are one dimensional.

I don't generally write reviews, but for this book, I thought I should.I have read many, many novels. I started out with MGA (couple of years ago) and have read WMW, LOTM, RI, DE, ATG, Soul Land, Coiling Dragon, Martial World, Supreme Magus and many more till date.So believe me when I say this-This is a HIDDEN GEM through and through.The BEST part of this novel is that there is almost nothing that one can label as cliché. The best parts of an Eastern Novel can be seen here.Do try it if you like xuanhuan/xianxia. You won't be disappointed.

First of all this is a great novel and I will continue to read it. That being said my following criticism should be seen as constructive and not judgemental or destructive.1. Forgetable/Mobs characters receive to much words and in certain cases their traits and mannerisms becomes indistinguishable from the main character. The way the writer writes dialogue further exacerbates this, making it hard for readers to distinguish between characters - especially during dialogue.2. The MC becomes aware of knowledge that he should not be aware of. This can be easily fixed by simply indicating that he is not aware of this and that this is the knowledge of the future MC bleeding into he’s own recounts of his past, because technically the MC is writing his own story about his past self. The author is fixing this in later chapters.Those two points are my bigest criticisms.

the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author

He had long hair, an imposing frame, a super stern and serious character and his eyes were not red, instead they were filled with concentric circles - "a congenital birth defect

He'd done all he could to prepare them for this day. He'd always known it would come. He told his men. Told his wife. Sometimes, he even told his dog when nobody else was willing to listen. They must have thought him a lunatic, he'd concluded to himself. Vindication didn't feel quite as satisfying as he hoped. No amount of justification prepares a mans stomach when they're on the verge of battle. His men would hold their own. They'd had some experience in the shield-wall. The benefits of having holdings along a border, he supposed. There were few other benefits to that.