Light Inside

Not a bad novel for webnovel standards. I had to drop it though because I really can't warm up to the main character. He is an absolute simp/creep and a lot of stuff is way to cringe for my taste.

I was the previous translator for this novel, and it's a great read to those of you guys who like OP mcs and the Litrpg genre in general.Translation quality:3/5. Subpar, but definitely decent. Although there are many things I disagree on such as the various character names as well as the arbitrary switch from 'free points' to 'omni points', the translator doesn't fall short of other Qidian translators. I rewrote some entire parts to intensify the story as well as fight scenes to make the story better on my own discretion, but if the translator doesn't want to it's his decision. The editing is horrible though, if there's one thing Qidian needs it's better editors. Multiple typos, spelling mistakes and one out of every two sentences was badly phrased. Translation would've been 3.5/5 if it weren't for editor. So tempted to join Qidian as an editor. Stability of Updates: 5/5, since it's Qidian. I mean, duh.Story Development: 5/5. One of the best Litrpg/Magic novels, and the plot certainly isn't cliche.Character Design: Uh this is a CN novel so you obviously don't have character development. But the personalities of the various characters do remain consistent so a solid 3/5. World Background:4/5. It does well on world-building too though it doesn't focus on that aspect. This novel has a good author.

There aren’t that many fillers. Some people may see it as such but after I’ve read through everything, it would actually play a big role to the overall plot of the story. Fantastic setting. Though I can’t say the setting’s a hundred percent original, it is well thought of and the author’s way of seeing and explaining things definitely gave it a fresh feeling. There are some(only some not that much) mistakes on the grammar and spelling but not a big deal to be honest. I would definitely recommend this novel to my friends. Thank you for your hard work, author-san!

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i first watched anime, then i watched untamed then i became obsessed so i read manga and i read novel now and I'm still not satisfied I'm addicted hahahah, it's amazing and it can easily break your soul and heal it at the same time, all the love:)

Just started reading it and though there aren't a pile of chapters, the meaning that the author is trying to deliver is done simply in a few words instead of chunks. The story line thus far is great as well though I have yet to finish reading, in overall terms, it's a great read that's definitely worth my time.

then suddenly someone opened the door and banged into the wall revealing the young boy who is really mad. He ran into the bed and jump into his older sister "big sister wake up!! " as Kristian slap his sisters arm to wake up then he looked at me "what are u staring at.. " he said glaring at me "im looking at u" I said and grinned at the young boy "QUITE STARING AND WAKE HER UP U IDIOT! " I flinched as he yelled at me like a old man "okay, okay. gezz.. Get some chills there young man... I'll wake her up when I want to" I said as he stamps at my leg and says "I want u to wake her up now!! " I felt the pain in my leg 'thank goodness he didn't stamp on my nuts' as he jump down of the bed and ran out of the room.

Iroko looked at the sky ahead of them filled with dark clouds. High up, the rumbling of the thunderclouds could be heard. Pondering for a while, the Lady looked back at the three deities behind her. "She does have a piece of his soul."