Ideas for Writers

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.Premise was fine then ,2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

i will try this i dont know how he  is nuclear it would change his dna and not good dna he would have cancer and it would eat and replace his cells

Literally worse English I ever read. Use your brain cells and write understandibly can't understand anything written.,...???.?..............

the mc is Lazy ........................................   ............   ..................... ........ ............................   .

its a really interesting story. which brings forth almost all cliche chinese novel protagonists . you can read the mtl from other sites it has 700+ chap.

Keep up the good work .........................................................................................................................................

Haven't started yet but I sure will ; I just hope it'll be as intriguing as it sounds. This is the first Horror Story I actually find myself liking...

Mediocre setting. Mediocre generic characters you see in every weekly new release. Mediocre plot that isn't all too interesting. Waste your time with this if you actually have nothing of substance to read. Otherwise don't give it the time of day.