Great start to this novel! Immediately got hooked from the first 4 chapters of the story! Writing quality is amazing as hell, BUT you could still improve by making use of more conciseness and sharper prose. Dialogue as natural, as it should be, and I really like how distinct your characters' voices are. Now, it may need some work on characters' appearances and the world-building, BUT you could always do that in the later chapters. Aside from that, keep it up man! I can see great potential in your book!

Author review, I am not gonna say anything since I am writing so, please support this novel

overall its passable. but it can be better

Oh my god crash and dek are og goated the elemental listing is crazy good the rank 1 is my favourite tho his powers makes the main characters look weak plus he teaches how to cook !! wicked

I have read it to chapter 15 and it is so damn interesting and i love the intense battle

"Service Charge" is an absolute gem! Ryo Okame is a refreshing and relatable protagonist, his hustle, determination, and struggles make him easy to root for. The blend of supernatural elements with his money-making schemes keeps the story engaging, with just the right balance of humor, mystery, and eerie suspense.The concept of using a third eye for financial gain is brilliant, and the deeper layers of intrigue make it impossible to put down. Each twist keeps you hooked, and the spirits he encounters add depth to the plot. Whether you're in for the adventure, the witty dialogue, or the ghostly chills, this story delivers on all fronts!Highly recommend for anyone looking for a fresh, thrilling, and entertaining read! Can't wait to see where Ryo's journey takes him next.

A really good story, keep up the good work.

I was kind of surprise that your writing an R18 book now. Anyway, good luck on saving 100,000 dollar.

This idea of not selecting text while uploading a chapter sucks. Anyways how do you upload or add a image or illustration in the chapter for better reading experience? If so then plz help me.

Amazing work! Can’t wait for the next chapters!

This might be peak..? Only 3 chapters, but as usual, Ky's prose is wonderful to read. Excited to see his take on this new story, and looking forward to the psychological romance--peak.

I saw some new novels where authors have zero experience. This one is perfect compared to the others, which have millions of views. I recommend