This is about a simp.Not sure what else to say about it. Made it to chapter 10 and noped my way out.Others may enjoy this but it is definitely not for me.
Liked the novel. Try to show character traits rather than telling them more. Also maybe you might want to limit the perspectives of other characters so we can figure things out as the protagonist does. Thanks for writing.
I like this novel it have its own ‘flavors’, it have interesting concepts it’s not a novel that everyone will like just because it have diferents concepts and approaches different of the ‘traditional way’, writing skills take time to Horne and it is just you first novel and to me it’s good
I'm at chapter ~583 as of writing this review, and well, where to begin? If you're new to this novel, you've probably noticed a bunch of minor but frustrating grammatical gimmicks and character flaws that don't really make you excited to keep reading. This would be a mistake on your part. This begins as a truthfully rather unpolished gem, but the author really hits their stride at around ~100 or so chapters. It's honestly amazing. The main character overcomes his naivete very quickly and is constantly learning and growing in ways that make sense. The world building is slow, but spectacular and logically consistent. The power scaling and power systems don't feel eclectic, despite their variety. Genuinely, just a fantastic novel. And the best part? It's free! By chapter 150, I started feeling really guilty for being able to read it all, expecting the "Unlock chapter for __ coins" popup to show at any point. It never did. The author is meticulous in their consistency. It was a genuine joy to read and now that I'm caught up, I'm hankering for even more chapters. You're missing out if you don't read this, seriously.
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