Dusk of Mankind

NGL I'm kinda upset about all these VRMMO(?) novels popping up everywhere. The thing is... video games don't matter. So when the entire plot is just a guy playing a video game 24/7, I can't help but wonder... what exactly is the point of these novels?

Great story, and is good to read. The characters in the story are funny and super cool. There are amazing fights and other things increasing the stories plot to more amazing.

Its fun and all in the story except that MC easily gets dragged into things again and again making him look like an idiot even though he seems to be smart.

The start is definitely a bit slow, but it’s still worth it! The only issue I have is the sometimes, the plot is a bit too convoluted and confusing to understand, so I’m left not knowing what is happening.Either way, an amazing read! Keep up the good work!

The novel is great.  Well penned buddy. The you you describe everything is great and the story is pretty good and mysterious.  Well done keep going

First off, this is not your average, everyday xianxia.Second, if you don't like 'slow' pacing (As deemed by the public due to the fact that he starts cultivation later on, despite the story itself being quite nicely paced), then I recommend that you skip this novel. (Although if you give it a try and find that the progression is indeed, not slow, but, quite fast/ moderate, you'll enjoy it quite a bit.)As a (non) English-expert, I personally have nothing to say and do not meet my self-requirements for critiquing the quality/ update stability.Also, as a (non) English-expert, I don't have any right to critique anything so... Take this for a grain of salt.Story Development: The story development, although perhaps a bit biased (Plot-armour), is beautiful. One thing that contributes to this is how the 'system' of the flower gives tasks that the MC is basically forced to do (Although in reality, the MC figures out what he should do, by which the task then becomes revealed; thus, every 'quest' is partly/ mostly his own thought). Another thing that contributes to this is how the story clearly explains every plot, plan, murder, and so forth.Character design: The MC is shown to be able to think for himself in multiple situations, having to adapt to the schemes of his enemies, make schemes of his own and so forth; It is because of this, that we gain constant insight into how his mind works, ****** the fleshing out of his personality concise.Other characters are (Of course), not as well-fleshed out as the MC; however, we still gain some insight into their personalities.World Building: The one thing that I feel (Kind~of) let the story down.Yes, the story does a fantastic job of the tip -"Show, don't tell"-; however, due to this, some details are skimmed over... It still does a fantastic job however, showing the different levels of officials, the difference in status between different levels of politicians, daoists, royalty and so forth.(To be honest, however, it was just the fact that I HAVE NO IDEA what the worth of a copper tael is :/, sure one gold tael is roughly equivalent to ten silver taels and five to seven silver taels can buy a mu of land (~614.4m^2, just imagine a square 25 by 25), but the worth of a copper tael is never explicitly stated... (Relative to silver/ gold).

"Not that one Host! Orange doesn't go with your skin tone and this style of dress doesn't flatter you enough! Oh my god, please try something else Host!" Sonja ripped the dress off her body for the nth time, its predecessors creating a mess on the bedroom floor. Not caring to put on anything else lest she would have to take it off in thirty seconds, Sonja threw herself across the bed while the system was currently analyzing what dress she should wear. The shrill nagging and urging, coupled with the constant mutterings and sudden yells from the system made Sonja feel like someone was taking a plate and dragging a fork across it, sending shivers of discomfort throughout her body, nevermind the massive headache she was having with the anxious system going through one of many panic attacks it had that day. Did lines of code have panic attacks? She didn't know nor did she want to ask.

Sinister feminine sneers reached the ears of Heiki, who pulled his long sword from its scabbard with his left hand.