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Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person.There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.

it's been a month, will there be any update? usually 1 chapter was release per month. .. ..

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Ahem, it's the author here...Well, as all of you might have noticed, I have quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in my novel. I am really trying to solve them but there are still some that I miss. English is not my first language so it's a little bit hard...So I wanted to apologize for making so many mistakes. Thank you for your understanding.

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