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I am sorry I didn't leave a full star review.But it's only the beginning so this was as high as I could go. I came from your tiktok video. I honestly really liked the idea of The Fallen Empire so I wanted to ask if you would continue that.Also if you could,please give my works a chance. It would be nice to know another writer is reading and you can maybe tell me where I went wrong and stuff.Your biggest hurdle is probably dialogue. Something I also struggle with. Atleast I saw that was the case with the four chapters I have read up until now.It would be better if each and every dialogue was unique to that person,don't always use the same tone,use descriptions to enhance the experience and feeling you can get from dialogue. Don't be afraid to use cliches as long as you don't fully rely on them. Pick a strong characteristic of your novel and run with it until the end.That's all.I am sorry I couldn't give any power stones since I ran out. I will give some tomorrow.

Could have ‘sworn I left a review, o well my bad. I will write one now. I give this work 5 stars, I believe it deserves it. Hard to find good reads now-a-days but this was definitely a good read thanks for the chapters

The novel is outstanding. The portrayal of expressions and emotions is incredibly well-crafted, making it feel very realistic. After reading the first chapter, I’m already invested and eager to see where the story goes.

nice storyline ,very interesting , keep up the good work 👍

It seems like this is gonna be extremely exciting! The plots, characters and events are not your typical novel one

This is giving off a dark novel vibe...my fav 🥰😘😍

Not sure there’s much more to say with the other well-written reviews here….Read the book - you’ll enjoy it.But be forewarned - it does suck you in!

This book is so great, like I had an apocalypse while sitting on my throne, it stuck and roasted me from within, but then I stumbled upon this masterpiece and MC's guide saved my life. This book is my bible when it comes to reading on the throne.

Hello! This is the author making a personal review.As of this time, I think my writing quality is still good but not perfect, you know? It sometimes get dialogue-heavy and personally while I don't dislike it, a semi-paragraph can feel overwhelming for a webnovel.For story development, I am content. But I do feel like I'm not good at certain transitions.In terms of update stability, character design, and world background. Perfect! Cause, why not?Personally there are still so many things to write and this simple review will not deep dive on those (read my novel... please...).By the way, to those reading this.Thank you for atleast checking out my novel.I am beyond grateful.

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“Your novel is a work of art that truly deserves appreciation! The characters are enjoyable and complex, and you are able to paint a fantastical world filled with details that transport the reader to new dimensions. The atmosphere you create in each chapter makes the reader feel as if they are living within this world. The plot is exciting and fast-paced, with events unfolding naturally, capturing the reader’s attention at every moment. The writing style is flexible and smooth, making it easy to dive into the depths of the story. There is a philosophical depth and new dimensions in the narrative that make every part of it meaningful. Without a doubt, this novel will leave a strong impact on the reader.”