Not very well written, the novel is very simplistic that it's pretty terrible. There's only two sides in this story from what I have read so far(20+) there's the main character side and the antagonist side. The antagonists side is very boring and underdeveloped where they hate the main character because the antagonists are small minded. I do not recommend reading this if you want actually depth to your story or a good plot.
Woah! I just came here for a review swap, didn't think I'd be interested!Firstly, as an author, I like your writing style alot! It's more detailed than I can ever be.Just a tiny flaw, your sentences are slightly off, structure wise, but it's getting better!Also, this is my favorite genre, so I'm adding this to my library! Thanks!
So I've read some of it, and this guy need a proof reader or an editor to fix the glaring text errors, the him/her and I/them/you are just a couple of the most obvious examples where the authors meaning in describing the who/what/how situation is happening is confusing and/or contradictory to what the author intended😩If those errors can be fixed then this may be a decent story, until then it feels like a somewhat machine translated story 🙁
Hi, author here with a shameless review, and a newbie at best. But I assure you that you won't hate this novel~And I just wanted to say that thank you to the people that have graced my novel with their time, and hope they enjoy exploring the novel world with me. It is the first to a series of novels.I also want to say that this is a novel compromised of a bunch of stories inter-linked, in other words, there are a lot of Povs, which I consider Chronicles, that direct the movement of the story. Join in to find out what I mean. You don't definitely won't hate it~
Easily addictive once the author finds himself after the 1st few chapters. This is a masterpiece I would love to see this animated it’s a joy to read and I want more.
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