Change Your Life

        RavenPool led SnowFlake into her den so that she could talk in private with her, "I think there is something special about ShockrimPaw... His leg is already healed and I didn't give him any herbs to help with it."

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

I was shocked by the surprise and in response, forced my arms to block his enormous punch. Did that hurt? Definitely.

The story overall has promise but dude the MC is a fcking dickhead  for 90% of the story for absolute no reason. No wonder his irl girlfriend left him, the fact he had one is already a miracle.It's really hard to continue reading from his POV and cheering for him. It's not even he is a villain with charm, just insufferable, the kinda side character you would want the MC to bitch slap.

Fuhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!

great world background, altough the writing style is too bulked up, but hey its still ch 5, it still can be improved !the pacing isnt the best, but we still have a long way to go

I come here.I check this.I found the sypnosis interesting.I tried reading some chapters.And.For A newbie.It's Peak. Not Gonna Like. It's Peak.The Beginning is peak.And How the story is going.It's also peak.Wating for more.

Lovely novel😆❤️❤️❤️ money spent worthed ❤️ every chapters full of excitement i am so inlove with this novel👍👍👍thank you for this wonderful story👑