Change Is Inevitable

Yurona snapped from her thoughts, throwing her pillow at the wall. "That fricking bastard! How dare he threaten me! I'll show him! I'll be the best hero he's ever been and I'll shove it in his face! I'll prove to him, he's wrong." She stood up, tossing the pillow over her shoulder for it to land on the bed.

"21 kana?" Gulat nitong tanong.

«Open naruto»

'Becuse I am the 9th prince.'

Here to give you a sparkling review to help boost you up friend. Keep working, keep pumping out chapters. Looks like you are well on your way! Keep on rocking! And remember, a cool transformation is always a dope thing to do for a hero :)

the author's use of descriptive language and vivid imagery helped me imagine things ngl, making me feel like I was right there in the midst of the action. the pacing is also rlly investing

The romance angle which is slowly developed from unwillingness to the power couple they evolve into is very admirable and well thought of by the author.Also, the emotions and characters are well fleshed out.I recommend everyone to try it.

It's a story with a lot of boring, meaningless, unnecessary monologues. My friend, decide first whether you are writing a poem or a story. This desire for poetic expression is like salt; if you add a little too much, it makes the food inedible. There's also some past life nonsense that breaks the immersion. The character died and was reborn, the event is over, why are you prolonging it? The reason for reading such stories is the person's desire to escape from reality. But you are spoiling the fun of those who want to forget reality even for a moment, don't do this. These are my recommendations, the subject is good, but unnecessary details and whining harm the story.