Noice it is back. I was really sad it wasn't selected one year ago.It is very creative novel on this website. will definitely read it and I do recommend it.
This novel has the potential I must say. I can sense the passion of the author in his creation. Though it was still not in its perfect form yet and has to be improved. But don't fret! You will improve in just a whim, you won't notice it. As I observe, you need to practice the flow of narration. World-building is solid and is its core. As for the character interactions, they were cheeky and wholesome. I can see myself when I am still beginning to write haha 😂 Good luck with your journey! All the best 👍
It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
The fact that over 100 chapters were already free is mind blowing not only that the writing is soooo good is this webnovel or I’m mistaken ?,with those factors alone at get 5 star at spot if thiers more star then 5, I will give it but sadly thirs not 😞
I just wanna add that don't, in the name of the World Tree, don't ever turn him into a human. You can give him humaniod properties and everything, but if MC suddenly becomes human later on, the story loses its uniqueness. And it's like every other system novel.
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