Blasian

In the morning

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

*Few moments later*

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

the story is good ... keep it up guys ..

It’s kinda annoying that you introduce this card system and barely even tell us what cards he gets. I know it’s alot but still it would be nice if we had a just a general idea like like out of this pack we got a artifact or out of this pack we got a summon ect and not just we got some random stuff so you can just make up things on the fly as you think of them also you havent actualized vlad which is tilting yet you actualized the other lengendary as soon as you got it and tried another but the system went on cool down. Tbh I’m reading for the gacha system and kingdom building alone but it feels like both of those things kinda just get brushed aside and we don’t get to see the progress of said things just the result. And this whole hearm thing you are trying to do feels really japan and vanilla asf where we don’t see anything and it gets left up to our imaginations at that point why even add it at all. Also the mc is kinda a sImp reminds me of normal isekai wimp protags

love this by the way author I want the book picture of this book, I really like it can you like upload it? ....,

Well, i've read all the chapters, paid ones included, and i can say it's not my piece of cake. i like a lighthearted story where i can relax and enjoy some piece and quiet. but this story is a joke. i tried to look past the author's attempt at jokes, but it got too far and it kinda ruined the mood. the premise of someone with trash talent somehow with only wits and his cheat to overcome his condition and rise above all else was intriguing but it somehow got made into a joke with author's attempt at jokes. overall, i want my money back

Even if it's only two chapters long, the author managed to pull me in into this new fantasy world with the amazing world building and the characters. The story is nicely written with a careful choice of words, making it flow smoothly without any kind of hiccups. It shows a lot of potential and will definitely have it on my reading list! 😁

My communication with my reader base is especially lacking. I put this here for those with suggestions and take joining the discord server as too burdensome.Please highlight areas of improvement and suggest unique ideas. I promise to respond. ^_^Of you're expecting a review, it's in the auxiliary Chaps, along with the link to my discord server.

What kind of demented stuff is on this app nowadays? Take your fetishes somewhere else. Disgusting.