I've only started reading this but I quickly realize this is something I'll keep reading the future. The pacing is actually alright. It won't overwhelm the readers but it also won't bore them.But I have to admit, the first few chapters I read kind of bug me. There's a few mistakes such as not putting quotation marks on a speech and lower case letters at the start of a sentence.
Reading status: 115 rawsIt was a decent novel, then nationalism infected it like a plague.Huaxia is the strongest. Huaxia cares for human lives unlike the baddy nation Indo-Union (Did they forget the early chaps where MC was used as a bait by the govt??).My guess is that the novel was written during China-India border conflict. Because in this novel, Indo-Union (Union of South asian and middle east nations) are portrayed as evil and shameless. Chapters after chapters have sentences that say how Huaxia ancestors suppressed indo-union, they describe indo-union as morally reprehensible and weak compared to Huaxia.Based on how we hear about other federations such as euro-union, my guess is that their turn is coming as well.This could be awe-inspiring for Chinese, but for international community, it is simply filled with racism and shit. A solution could be to change the name of nations in translations. Well, if it gets picked that is.
Hey guys to make things clear. This novel will include wars, history, politics, comedy, mystery ect..Cultivation will also be there but not overpowered.Cultivatiors will be valuable to kingdoms as they change the war results but they're not everything sometimes strategies and smarts are more valuable.I'll lay the groundwork and give you an idea of the world in the first chapters and then there's gonna be a time skip so we can get some badass mc action
I’m not too sure what the author is thinking half the time.First it hints at Yao Li liking Yan Feng, with her staring at him when he was comforting the student council president, and then out of nowhere, it says that Yao Li has had a crush on Han Xiao (MC) for a long time.I just don’t understand why you hint at her liking Yan Feng if she doesn’t. It just gets annoying.
Being interrogated by the parents like I am a "man" wanting to woo their "daughter". I did all these,losing a piece of myself everytime till I don't know who I was. Till i don't care or love myself.
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