Billionaire In Shining Armour

Hello readers. The author here.  I'm giving myself a 5-star review. 🤓 😎A few notes about the book.-> This is a personal journey about a football/soccer player with a system. It won't be just about matches and some training but also include some bits about his personal life. A key question to my plotting is how the MC's personal life affects his career and playing ability in individual matches. But of course,  there'll be exciting matches in the plot showing the MC's rise. Be assured. I have to stop there with the spoilers 👀🙄I do hope you try out the book. Thank you. 🙏

awesome book plz pick this one ..............................................................................................🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

There is nothing wrong with nationalism , I'm honestly  a little jealous of the dedication and reverence the chinese have for their coutry and the MC choosing to always support his own country is understandable ; BUT why would an author ever start insulting and demeaning other countries ?  All in all , this novel is really good , the MC is decisive , bold and rational

Like someone else said, the concept is fairly similar to Everybody Else is a Trainee.This review is based on the free chapters only.Honestly, I don't think this is that good, but it's decent enough to pass the time with if you're bored I guess. The main problem I have is with the MC. He adapts pretty quickly in the beginning, not doubting or confirming things for himself, and completely taking things in stride without seemingly any reaction a normal person would have. And he assumes a lot of things without any basis or proof, which makes the developments seem forced. The plot also goes by pretty quickly, and although that may be necessary considering that there's five hundred years of ground needing to be covered, it still feels like the time skips happen too fast and too often. Like in the first few chapters it's hey three years go by, hey ten years of travel goes by, and it just feels wayyyyyy too quick and a bit of a cop out. In general I think those are the main problems. I can get over the time skips since I guess they sort of make sense for the current point in the plot, but I really am not a fan of the MC. He honestly just doesn't feel very realistic. After living many years it makes sense, but since it started from the beginning and there are so many time skips that doesn't really allow for character development to be written out, it ends up with him still feeling like a very unrealistic character.

This is a good story and the pace is very good. Read it for what is a story, not your personal made up event. i get tired of poeple telling authors how to write their story. This is a awesome read and should be getting more hype. Two thumbs up and keep it going Author-sama…. Oh ya drinks on me served by her. Back off buddy, she is MINE. LOL starts fist fight just because a little brawl always make the drinking better.

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Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel.Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.

Time passed, each time approaching the time to go to the academy. The servants of the Asakura family prepared everything necessary for their young master, that included the books and necessary material.