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An interesting concept in which the reader chooses the path of the main character. It is the perfect read for someone who wishes to interact with the story in a meaningful way while reading a well-written plot. Good work, author!
Hello Everyone! This is the author of this new novel. This has been a work that I have always wanted to write, but never dared to due to several reasons.1. I have pretty bad grammar and vocabulary (Sorry :P)2. I am a high school student and I do not have that much time to write new chapters everyday (However I do try my best!)3. I never really found a suitable platform to show my work on, but I finally found it on Webnovel :)I hope you guys like the novel as it was actually inspired from all my biology studying and the martial arts novels that I LOVEE to read. If you guys have any comments be sure to drop it below and I will try my best to adjust to it!
This review may change in the future, who knows. I'm only 15 chapters in.I'm not gonna lie: the story is good and interesting. I love a good Reincarnation story. The characters are mildly interesting. At least I'm not seeing the cliche of every single character hating the MC for no good reason. There are a few grammar hiccups, but the writing style is good.Now, the author doesn't seem to have a firm grip on updating. I suspect we'll be getting either 2 to 3 chapters a week, which is okay.The pacing is a bit off. Some moments are rushed and others take too long. Luckily, there are not many of those scenes in the book.As I said before, the characters are mildly interesting and they don't all seem to hate the MC. What hate he does get is entirely his own fault because he's a snarky twit.The MC lived a bad life before, but the author doesn't try to shove this down our throats. They give us a bit of information, namely when the MC us moaning about the bad choices he made. I hope I see some growth in the future.I think I'll write another one as the story progresses, to see if it gets better.
The only thing I have against this book is the daily updates. Waiting for updates is so unpleasant. Regardless, I love the book, the name of the book is enough to capture one's attention. Still it's a great piece of work.
I have also just read the first few chapters yet but I can see a lot of potential in your story.I'm not the biggest fantasy fan however I think that many people, who like fantasy, would enjoy this novel as the setting and the plot are very intriguing.Just like the others already pointed out, there are a few grammar errors but all in all I didn't see it as a big problem. Aside from that, I like your writing style:)I will continue reading this so keep it up author!
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
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