Off to an intriguing start! The mix of supernatural and interstellar themes is really unique. The pacing is smooth, and the premise is fresh. Can't wait to see where the story goes next!

Keep up the good work, I'm always waiting 🥰

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love the flow of the story, and the context, but there is an improvement sometimes our words will become vague, overall it was good and i highly recommend for those readers

Too much fighting/training for me. Honestly, it would be a much better read if the MC had more interactions with the main cast or the original MC of the novel instead of just the teachers.Even with them, his interactions are too focused on training. It feels like you're trying to make him a killing machine whose only goal is to kill the final boss and save the world 🌍. While that goal is fine, it's not enough on its own. His life shouldn't revolve  around fighting and improving himself to kill someone who appears at the very end of the novel.{he needs proper character development in this aspect.}Also, the fact that the MC can learn anything at a glance makes him a bit boring for me.Lastly, I think the story would improve if the MC formed deeper bonds with other characters while reducing the number of training chapters.I hope you find my review helpful.

I like the overall idea of the book. From the world building to the dialogues and description. Good work

Pretty good read tbh seems promising so far, pretty good writing, the ‘rank infos’ auxiliary chapter made me feel like I should redo mine lol

A must read; much of the issues, delays with court, life tribulation are all relatable. I hope Diane gets her share of what she deserves. As for Liam, I hope it hits him where it hurts.

This is such a unique novel. You are so talented at writing, making the reader actually see what is happening. I added it to my library and will keep reading, but so far, this is peak.Also Dorian Kael is the goat, will be remembered.

Beginning chapters already sealed the deal for me. Mc is quite pathetic actually. Half of the chapters he just kept saying how he didn’t deserve to be in this world and how he should die and some other dumb stuff which honestly makes you able to tell the mc won’t be a fun one or anything. Seems to be a bit of a simp for sure. Not to mention the beginning made no sense either but whatever. Title got me interested but the chapters got me uninterested.

wow cant' wait to read the next chapter.

This sounds like an exciting twist on a martial arts fantasy! The idea of an earthling jumping into the reincarnation river is intriguing, and it sets up a lot of potential for action and growth. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes!